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Particularly, when [[Temeraire]] and the crew of the ''[[HMS Potentate]]'' shipwrecked on the coast of Japan, the Celestial successfully identified a Sui-Riu dragon. However, after recognizing it as a Sui-Riu from Sir Edward Howe's work on Oriental breeds, Temeraire realized that it was "immense...truly immense", and noted that [[Lily]], a [[Longwing]], was "not a third his size".  
 
Particularly, when [[Temeraire]] and the crew of the ''[[HMS Potentate]]'' shipwrecked on the coast of Japan, the Celestial successfully identified a Sui-Riu dragon. However, after recognizing it as a Sui-Riu from Sir Edward Howe's work on Oriental breeds, Temeraire realized that it was "immense...truly immense", and noted that [[Lily]], a [[Longwing]], was "not a third his size".  
  
Temeraire also noted that the Sui-Riu breed was "very long", and with "stubby wings". The Celestial also noticed that the voice of a Sui-Riu "carried over water clear enough", and sounded more like a "distant thundercloud than anything else".
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Temeraire also noted that the Sui-Riu breed was "very long", and with "stubby wings". The Celestial also noticed that the voice of a Sui-Riu "carried over water clear enough", and sounded like a "distant thundercloud than anything else".
  
 
Of the Sui-Riu's ability as a water-spitter, Temeraire noted, "The serpentine dragon drew back...its own small wings flattening against its back, and then plunged its head into the water and opened its jaw wide. The dragon, already so massive but slender, began now to rapidly swell up and out to the sides: Temeraire could not understand in the least how he was managing it, and then the dragon reared itself back out and up, and up, and up, and it blasted Lily and all the others with a torrent of water....Even Maximus was swept off his feet, and was now tangled and struggling up against the tree-line; Lily was coughing and sputtering, having taken the brunt of the torrent, jerking her head, and Nitidus and Dulcia had been carried into the bay itself and were floundering in the waves. Immortalis and Churki were a tumbled and sand-clogged mess flung into the woods, trying to get their footing again." (''Blood of Tyrants'', p. 33)
 
Of the Sui-Riu's ability as a water-spitter, Temeraire noted, "The serpentine dragon drew back...its own small wings flattening against its back, and then plunged its head into the water and opened its jaw wide. The dragon, already so massive but slender, began now to rapidly swell up and out to the sides: Temeraire could not understand in the least how he was managing it, and then the dragon reared itself back out and up, and up, and up, and it blasted Lily and all the others with a torrent of water....Even Maximus was swept off his feet, and was now tangled and struggling up against the tree-line; Lily was coughing and sputtering, having taken the brunt of the torrent, jerking her head, and Nitidus and Dulcia had been carried into the bay itself and were floundering in the waves. Immortalis and Churki were a tumbled and sand-clogged mess flung into the woods, trying to get their footing again." (''Blood of Tyrants'', p. 33)

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